The Cheshire Cat

Rated PG-13 for Language and Graphic Violence. We should have listened. Those were the words that danced across everyone’s lips as they crawled out of collapsed homes or crushed cars. ...

Wow Rachel! This is a truly powerful piece that I think has a lot of potential. From the sound of it, I think you will really enjoy delving deeper into ...

**Here is my character Profile guys. :) Looks like a fun storybook. Hope you don't mind me jumping in.** NAME: Evander Leronge McLauffe; Will not tolerate nicknames. Goes only as ...

Ahhhhh! Beautiful! I love it! The imagery and word choice was so profound and strong. Amazing. There is very little I can critique one, just a few little typos... Wherer ...

I didn't really find any grammar mistakes, but I was a little confused at the beginning as i read on I didn't really understand why you mentioned Blithe at the ...

Oooh looking great! I absolutely LOVE scary stories (expecially telling them) so hopefully my advice is good :) One of the biggest things about scary stories is, of course, scaring ...

You know you're a writer when... ...the letters on your keyboard have been worn away from constant use. ...you family officially thinks you're insane after walking in on you yelling ...

Entertaining People. Thats the reason I enjoy writing. I love to envoke emotions in people and paint a picture. It makes me so happy xD

Well, you certainly managed to get me hooked. I really love the idea you have here, and not only is it fun to read, but it also sounds fun to ...

Chapter 4 In which things become a little complicated "Sometimes its good to be bad." - Rober Moore As Ebony attempted to avoid the onslaught of thick drunken drool, the ...

Gaaah i'm so behind DX I'm supposed to be at 13,000+ but i'm only at 6200... ________ After signing in, the two went to get something for dinner. Violet dragged ...

It happens it all good writers. You're minding your own business, making head-way on your lovely story, when suddenly you get the feeling you've just lost control. Before you know ...

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A rather boring chapter... _____ The day outside had improved greatly. The sun had come out at last and the many residents of Gregory’s hometown had emerged from their shelters ...

Thank you all very much. Yes, I've read lots from Lemony Snicket. In fact, he was really the one who made me want to write. His books were funny, suspenseful, ...